Subject
a pillow fort in the backyard, shaded by a big old tree. Wind chimes tinkle gently in the breeze. Sunlight filters through the leaves, and a young boy and his golden retriever naps beside a tray of lemonade and cookies. Warm afternoon light, spirited and nostalgic, children's book illustrated feeling. Refine: add a 'shot on [camera]' line to lean more documentary, less stylized.